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Testimonials and selected work

With 15 years’ experience editing theses, academic articles and other publications, I have supported writers through the challenges of preparing their work for submission and publication. Here are two clients’ experiences, followed by a selection of works I have helped prepare.

Supporting a doctoral researcher

“Adele was an amazing support while I was writing my PhD thesis. I had lost my Endnote database and Adele was an expert in helping to re-establish all of my citations. Having her support meant I could focus on my writing and research instead of worrying about referencing protocols. However, I am most grateful to Adele for her editing work as the thesis was completed. Her expertise was invaluable when it came to correct style and formatting. I was so grateful to have worked with Adele. I doubt I would have met my submission deadline if I didn’t have her wonderful help along the way. Highly recommended.”

Dr Leanne Faulkner

Leanne completed her PhD thesis, When size matters: Mentally healthy workplaces for sole traders and micro-business owners, at the University of Newcastle in 2024. Her research offers valuable insights into mental health in Australia’s sole-trader and micro-business workplaces.

A longstanding editing partnership

“Adele has been my editor for more than 10 years. From first draft to final, she has a sharp eye for clarity, precision and grammar. Her standard of work has been consistently of an exceptionally high standard.”

Dennis Mok

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It has been a pleasure to support Dennis’s writing and publication work over more than a decade. The following selection illustrates the breadth of that work, including articles co-authored with colleagues in laboratory medicine, quality management and healthcare.

Selected publications and manuscripts

The works below are grouped by year, with the most recent first. Publication details and manuscript status are listed as supplied.

20255 works

  • Evaluation of walk in cool room risk control measures for internal auditing: compliance practicalities for the Australian Standard AS ISO 15189:2023 accredited medical laboratory.

    Mok D, Eloyan N, Chowdhury S, Nabulsi R, Salleh MN, Sindt CMK, Christoff-Tzazaroff J, Nguyen T, Norkunas K, Koutin G

    Original article

    Under review.

  • Promoting gender equality in pathology and laboratory medicine leadership

    Nabulsi R, Mok D

    Review article

    Clinics in Laboratory Medicine. 2025;45(3):421–436.

  • Implementation of laser warning markings for equipment in the Australian Standard AS ISO 15189:2023 accredited medical laboratory

    Mok D, Eloyan N, Nabulsi R, Chowdhury S, Sindt CMK, Norkunas K, Christoff-Tzazaroff J, Nguyen T

    Quality Update

    Australian Journal of Medical Science. 2025;46(3):138–144.

  • Light microscopic analysis of Plasmodium falciparum in Giemsa-stained thin blood films.

    Mok D, Eloyan N, Nabulsi R, Chowdhury S, Koutin G, Christoff-Tzazaroff J, Norkunas K, Sindt CMK

    Technical note

    Australian Journal of Medical Science. 2025;46(2):92–96.

  • Implementation of risk control measures to manage the storage of hazardous medical sharps waste.

    Mok D, González Guerrero MR, Nabulsi R, Eloyan N, Chowdhury S, Diep TT, Sindt CMK, Meharry S, Norkunas K

    Quality Update

    Australian Journal of Medical Science. 2025;46(1):31–34.

20245 works

  • Preferred terminology for the description of ‘ripped erythrocytes’.

    Mok D, Nabulsi R, Chowdhury S, Eloyan N, Meharry S, Koutin G, Diep TT, González Guerrero MR, Sindt CMK, Ma ACY, Gillespie DM, Sololova L

    Technical note

    Australian Journal of Medical Science. 2024;45(4):235–241.

  • From chaos to quality control.

    Mok D, Eloyan N

    Quality World. 2024;51(4):24–29.

  • Preferred terminology for cytotoxic T cells.

    Mok D, Eloyan N, Nabulsi R, Chowdhury S, Koutin G, Neill A

    Technical note

    Australian Journal of Medical Science. 2024;45(3):195–196.

  • Implementation of risk control measures to manage storage of corrosive substances.

    Mok D, Eloyan N, Chowdhury S, Nabulsi R, Gillespie DM, Diep TT, González Guerrero MR, Koutin G, Palit R, Nguyen TH

    Quality Update

    Australian Journal of Medical Science. 2024;45(2):105–109.

  • Laser warning markings for equipment and instruments in ISO 15189:2022 accredited labs.

    Mok D, Eloyan N, Nabulsi R, Chowdhury S, González Guerrero MR, Lee W, Gillespie DM

    Scientific letter

    New Zealand Journal of Medical Laboratory Science. 2024;78(1):34–35.

20233 works

  • Afinion 2 Analyzer maintainability.

    Dayrit GB, Mok D, Nabulsi R, Eloyan N, Chowdhury S, Ma ACY

    Original article

    Acta Medica Philippina. 2023;57(11):72–91.

  • Risk control for flammable liquid storage.

    Mok D, Eloyan N, Chowdhury S, Lee W, Williams J

    Quality Update

    Australian Journal of Medical Science. 2023;44(2):87–89.

  • Photobiological warning markings.

    Mok D, Eloyan N, Gillespie DM, Nabulsi R, Diep TT, Chowdhury S, Koutin G

    Quality Update

    Australian Journal of Medical Science. 2023;44(4):175–177.

20224 works

  • Professional practice evaluation.

    Dayrit GB, Mok D, Eloyan N, Nabulsi R, Chowdhury S, Ma ACY

    Original article

    Australian Journal of Medical Science. 2022;43(4):93–105.

  • Internal auditing review conformity checklist.

    Mok D, Chowdhury S, Eloyan N, Nabulsi R, Dayrit GB, Ma ACY

    Original article

    Australian Journal of Medical Science. 2022;43(23):52–59.

  • Exposure control to flammable refrigerants.

    Mok D, Eloyan N, Chowdhury S, Nabulsi R, Dayrit GB, Ma ACY, Nguyen DTC

    Scientific letter

    New Zealand Journal of Medical Laboratory Science. 2022;76(2):93–94.

  • Saudi Arabian trauma system development.

    Chowdhury S, Mok D, Leenen L

    Original article

    Journal of Medicine and Life. 2022;15(1):34–42.

20217 works

  • Single-use sharps containers.

    Mok D, Dayrit GB, Eloyan N, Chowdhury S

    Mini-review

    International Journal of Biomedical Laboratory Science. 2021;10(2):64–66.

  • Laser warning markings.

    Mok D, Dayrit GB, Eloyan N, Chowdhury S

    Mini-review

    International Journal of Biomedical Laboratory Science. 2021;10(2):67–70.

  • Infectious waste plastic bag disposal.

    Mok D, Dayrit GB, Eloyan N, Chowdhury S

    Mini-review

    International Journal of Biomedical Laboratory Science. 2021;10(2):61–63.

  • PPE for laboratory personnel.

    Mok D, Dayrit GB, Eloyan N, Chowdhury S, Nabulsi R, González Guerrero MR

    Mini-review

    International Journal of Biomedical Laboratory Science. 2021;10(2):71–74.

  • Panbio COVID-19 rapid test conformity evaluation.

    Mok D, Eloyan N, Chowdhury S

    Original article

    New Zealand Journal of Medical Laboratory Science. 2021;75(2):110–114.

  • Class II biosafety cabinet protective countermeasures.

    Mok D, Chowdhury S, Nabulsi R, Eloyan N, Jürs M, González Guerrero MR

    Original article

    New Zealand Journal of Medical Laboratory Science. 2021;75(1):26–32.

  • Transformation of healthcare in Saudi Arabia.

    Chowdhury S, Mok D, Leenen L

    Original article

    Journal of Medicine and Life. 2021;14(3):347–354.

20203 works

  • ISO 15189:2012 process evaluation & improvement update.

    Mok D, Eloyan N, Chowdhury S

    Original article

    New Zealand Journal of Medical Laboratory Science. 2020;74(3):194–197.

  • Process control & planning stage update.

    Mok D, Chowdhury S

    Original article

    New Zealand Journal of Medical Laboratory Science. 2020;74(2):103–106.

  • Management review input checklist.

    Mok D, Nabulsi R, Chowdhury S

    Original article

    New Zealand Journal of Medical Laboratory Science. 2020;74(1):17–21.

20191 work

  • Strategic management stage update.

    Mok D, Chowdhury S

    Original article

    New Zealand Journal of Medical Laboratory Science. 2019;73(3):111–115.

20182 works

  • API 20 E conformity evaluation.

    Mok D, Nabulsi R, Chowdhury S

    Original article

    New Zealand Journal of Medical Laboratory Science. 2018;72(3):90–95.

  • ISO 22870:2016 document review checklists.

    Mok D, Nabulsi R, Chowdhury S

    Original article

    New Zealand Journal of Medical Laboratory Science. 2018;72(2):59–64.

20172 works

  • ISO 15189:2012 implementation checklists for accreditation bodies.

    Mok D

    Original article

    New Zealand Journal of Medical Laboratory Science. 2017;71(3):84–99.

  • ISO 22870:2016 conformance requirements.

    Mok D, Nabulsi R, Chowdhury S

    Original article

    New Zealand Journal of Medical Laboratory Science. 2017;71(2):41–54.

20162 works

  • ISO 15189:2012 implementation update.

    Mok D, Ang E

    Original article

    New Zealand Journal of Medical Laboratory Science. 2016;70(2):42–66.

  • ISO 15189:2012 internal auditing checklist.

    Mok D, Chowdhury S

    Original article

    Australian Journal of Medical Science. 2016;37(2):48–55.

20151 work

  • Terminological clarification for ISO 15189 audits.

    Mok D

    Original article

    Australian Journal of Medical Science. 2015;36(4):106–118.